Language may fail a spy: Why Dhurandhar: The Revenge needed a linguist
as much as it needed style
There is much to admire in Aditya Dhar’s espionage universe. Both Dhurandhar instalments are tightly paced, visually confident and populated with compelling performances. The sequel, Dhurandhar: The Revenge, is in many ways a more assured film than its predecessor. And yet, for a project that leans so heavily on cross-border intrigue, one foundational element repeatedly undermines its credibility: language.
Note that this is not a minor quibble about purism;
language is tradecraft in a spy drama. Accent, intonation, diction and register
function as operational tools, not surface embellishments. Get them wrong, and
the illusion collapses.
Urdu errors that break immersion
The first jolt arrives in the first film itself, with
a televised newsreader using the form “ilzāmātoñ”. The error that persists
into the sequel is “jazbātoñ”. In both cases, a plural noun was further
pluralised. These are basic inflectional mistakes that even an average
illiterate Urdu speaker of Karachi would flag.
More serious is a semantic lapse in a torture-chamber
scene, where a Pakistani Muslim officer refers to Muslims as “jihadis”. Within
Urdu and Arabic usage, jihadi is a pejorative label, typically deployed
by critics to describe Islamist militants. A self-referential term would be mujāhid
(plural: mujāhidīn), both of which the film does use elsewhere. That
makes the inconsistency more glaring: the script knows the correct lexicon but
fails to apply it in a crucial moment.
Then comes talaffuz—pronunciation. Arjun Rampal
struggles to distinguish between the aspirated “kh” (ख/کھ) used in Indic-origin words and the fricative
“kẖ” (ख़/خ) found in Arabic–Persian borrowings. Hardly
subtle, this is phonemic in Urdu. Collapsing the two produces a flattened,
unidiomatic speech pattern that immediately marks the speaker as an outsider.
Sanjay Dutt, ill at ease even with Hindi throughout
his career, is similarly ill at ease with Urdu. This is a casting and coaching
failure. If a role demands linguistic authenticity, the production must invest
in it.
The missed opportunity is most evident with Ranveer
Singh. As his work in Bajirao Mastani and Rocky Aur Rani Kii Prem
Kahaani shows, he is a gifted mimic capable of internalising regional
accents. Here, however, his Urdu floats in a vacuum—neither Sindhi nor Balochi,
neither Lakhnavi nor Punjabi. It lacks geographic anchoring, the very thing
that gives spy identities their plausibility.
Even English is not spared. R. Madhavan pronounces
“HM” as “hetch-em”. While that variant exists, it is regionally marked. The
character—modelled loosely on Ajit Doval but named Ajay Sanyal in the film—is
either Uttarakhandi or Bengali. Neither speech community would typically
produce “hetch” for “H”; north Indian English prefers “etch”, while Bengali
English leans towards “eitch”. Here, the issue is internal coherence rather than
pedantic exactitude.
Sanskrit ‘sacrificed’
If the Urdu slips are audible, the film’s final
Sanskrit caption is a visual eyesore:
“बलिदान परमों धर्मः”
The correct construction is:
“बलिदानं परमो धर्मः”
Balidānam is a neuter noun; in the
nominative singular, it takes the -am ending. “परमों” is simply not
Sanskrit; the anusvāra here is erroneous. “धर्मः” remains
masculine, and the predicative adjective “परमो” agrees with
it. The sentence, in effect, equates a neuter concept (sacrifice) with a
masculine category (the highest dharma), a standard and perfectly
acceptable construction in Sanskrit.
That such a line passes into a big-budget film
suggests the absence of even minimal philological vetting.
It’s the generation that lacks
These lapses perhaps reflect a broader linguistic
decline. After the failure of the 2006 remake of Umrao Jaan, Amitabh
Bachchan remarked that a generation familiar with the refined culture of old
Lucknow and Faizabad—its language, etiquette and social codes—had faded. The
1981 original by Muzaffar Ali drew from that living memory; its remake could
not.
More recently, Jaideep Ahlawat observed in an
interview that many Hindi-speaking youth today struggle to read their own
language in Devanagari. If that is the baseline, expecting fluency in Urdu—if
not written in Nastaliq, rich in Perso-Arabic vocabulary nevertheless—may seem
unrealistic.
But this is precisely where the industry must
intervene. Hindi cinema once routinely employed Urdu scholars to coach actors
and singers. That practice dwindling was a benighted choice the industry made
in the 1990s. India still has universities, departments of linguistics, and
independent scholars who can provide dialect coaching, phonetic training and
script supervision.
For a film about spies operating in Pakistan, this is
not optional. As any intelligence professional would attest, a field operative
who cannot reproduce local talaffuz (pronunciation), lahja
(accent), tarz (intonation) and makhraj (diction) would be
compromised within minutes.
There is also a simpler alternative: if a production
cannot handle a language with competence, avoid using it. Many English-language
films set in ancient Greece or Rome do not attempt Greek or Latin; they
prioritise accessibility and consistency over flawed authenticity.
Direction: Style, momentum and minor excesses
Set aside the linguistic issues, and Dhar’s direction
remains assured. The sequel is brisk, rarely indulgent, and sustains narrative
tension with commendable discipline. The transition from the Indian to the
Pakistani setting is visually striking, though the initial half-hour in
Pakistan veers towards stylisation at the cost of realism. Performances and
staging settle into a more credible rhythm thereafter, turning the film into a
consistently engaging watch.
One aesthetic decision does jar: the red on-screen
captions—again with poor transliteration—which were effective in the trailer,
feel distracting within the film’s diegesis. Their removal would have improved
tonal cohesion.
The film’s fictional liberties are largely confined to
the arc involving Dawood Ibrahim, whose current condition and strategic
importance remain opaque in reality.
Perfect cast, class acts
If speech falters, physical casting often excels.
Salim Sidiqui’s Atif Ahmed—clearly modelled on Atiq Ahmed—is striking in both
appearance and demeanour. Mashhoor Amrohi’s Nawab Shafiq, based on Nawaz
Sharif, is similarly well-conceived.
Madhavan as a Doval lookalike, Rampal as Ilyas
Kashmiri’s doppelganger, Dutt’s get-up as Chaudhry Aslam Khan, Rakesh Bedi as
Nabil Gabol (by Gabol’s own admission), etc were noticed in the first part
already.
The central spy figure, Jaskirat Singh Rangi alias
Hamza Ali Mazari, is fictional but plausibly constructed, drawing on the broad
contours of real intelligence operations. It is important to clarify that the
character is not based on Mohit Sharma (d. 2009), despite widespread media
speculation.
Journalist Aditya Raj Kaul, who contributed to the
film’s research, has publicly stated that Indian Army personnel are not
deployed as deep-cover moles in Pakistan. This directly undermines both the
identification of a “real Dhurandhar” and the associated claims that the
timeline of events depicted in the film is historically inaccurate.
The confusion is particularly striking given that
Sharma was a recipient of the Ashoka Chakra (posthumous), India’s highest
peacetime gallantry award, conferred for exceptional bravery away from
conventional battlefield combat. The attempt to recast such a figure as the
template for a covert intelligence operative reflects a fundamental
misunderstanding of both military roles and the award itself.
If the film occasionally falters at the level of
language, it more than compensates through performance. Across the board, the
cast demonstrates a high degree of control and immersion, with Ranveer Singh
anchoring the narrative with particular finesse.
One of the most telling moments comes early in the
film, when Jaskirat poses for a family photograph. His body stiffens, the smile
sits uneasily on his face, and his fists remain subtly clenched. It is a finely
observed detail—the awkward, slightly overcomposed demeanour typical of a
lower-middle-class man unaccustomed to the performative ritual of being
photographed. The effect is disarmingly authentic.
The closing stretch offers an equally powerful, if
more restrained, demonstration of craft. The protagonist returns home but stops
short of announcing himself to his mother and sister. Confronted with the quiet
realisation that life has moved on in his absence, he withdraws without a word.
The scene is devoid of melodrama, relying instead on stillness and emotional
compression. The pathos it generates is profound, and the audience response in
theatres reflects that impact.
Real-world backdrop
One of the film’s strengths is its grounding in
verifiable patterns of crime, politics and counter-terrorism. Several elements
it depicts have clear real-world analogues.
1. Rogue politics and crime in Punjab
The suggestion of political–criminal overlap in Indian
Punjab is not without basis. While Punjab’s law-and-order profile is generally
better than that of some northern states, it has faced a severe drug crisis.
Government and parliamentary data over the past decade have repeatedly flagged a
high prevalence of opioid use.
In 2018, a major national survey estimated that lakhs
of individuals in Punjab were dependent on opioids, creating fertile ground for
cross-border smuggling networks linked to Pakistan-based handlers.
2. Use of low-level operatives across the border
The film’s claim that India has, at times, used petty
or condemned criminals as cross-border assets echoes longstanding allegations
around human intelligence (HUMINT) practices in South Asia. While official
confirmation is rare, investigative reports and memoirs have described the
recruitment of individuals from border states—especially Punjab and
Rajasthan—for low-level espionage tasks, often with deniability built in.
3. Underworld and political nexus in India
The depiction of a politician–underworld nexus in
Uttar Pradesh during the eras of the Samajwadi Party and the Bahujan Samaj
Party is grounded in a substantial body of reportage. Figures like Atiq Ahmed
exemplified the blurring of lines between electoral politics and organised
crime. Crime statistics from the 2000s and early 2010s show a high incidence of
violent offences, including kidnapping for ransom, a crime that became
synonymous with the state during that period.
The subsequent tenure of Yogi Adityanath has been
marked by a controversial policy of police “encounters”. Official data released
by the Uttar Pradesh Police has claimed thousands of encounters and a sharp
reduction in certain categories of crime. However, critics have raised concerns
about due process and extrajudicial killings.
4. Pakistan-backed terrorism and demonetisation
India has consistently accused Pakistan of supporting
cross-border terrorism, particularly in Jammu and Kashmir. Government data
presented in Parliament over the years has documented hundreds of infiltration
attempts annually, with fluctuating success rates depending on border
management and intelligence inputs.
The film’s reference to the impact of demonetisation
on terror financing reflects a real debate. Following the 2016 currency
withdrawal, Indian agencies reported short-term disruptions in counterfeit
currency networks and certain funding channels. However, most security analysts
agree that militant organisations adapted over time, shifting to alternative
methods, including digital transfers and smuggling of high-quality fake notes.
D-Company question
The film touches on the enduring mystique of Dawood
Ibrahim and his network. It is widely reported that after fleeing India in the
1990s, he operated out of Dubai before establishing a base in Karachi. However,
portraying him as superior to Pakistan’s Inter-Services Intelligence (ISI) in
the country’s informal power hierarchy stretches plausibility. The ISI remains
a central node in Pakistan’s security architecture, and any non-state actor’s
autonomy would be contingent on its tolerance.
Equally uncertain are claims about the current health
of Ibrahim and the extent, if any, of Indian involvement in it. Public
information is fragmentary, and much of it is speculative.
Make precision Bollywood’s policy
The only issue with Dhurandhar is its
linguistic shortcoming. The authenticity of parlance cannot be retrofitted; it
must be embedded in pre-production. That means:
- Script
vetting by linguists for grammar, register and
idiom.
- Dialect
coaching tailored to specific regions (Sindh,
Balochistan, Punjab, Lucknow).
- Phonetic
training to ensure actors internalise sound systems,
not thoughtlessly memorise lines.
- Consistency
checks across departments—dialogue, subtitles,
on-screen text.
These are standard practices in many global
industries. Their absence in a film of this scale is conspicuous.
Dhurandhar: The Revenge succeeds as a
piece of commercial cinema—engaging, well-cast and narratively efficient. It
falters where it should have been most meticulous: language. In a genre where a
misplaced vowel can expose a spy, such lapses are structural.
The remedy is neither
complicated nor prohibitively expensive. It requires the industry to recognise
that authenticity is not an aesthetic luxury but a narrative necessity. Until
then, films about covert operations will continue to be undone by the most overt
of flaws: misspoken words.
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